Sentences/independent clauses Fragment Missing subject Missing verb Subordinate conjunctions: after, although, as, as if Although he wanted to go to the meeting. Whoever goes to the meeting. Run-on sentences Fused sentence Comma splice Add comma “ after the movies, we went to dinner” Semi colon and period fixes comma splice and run on sentences. Capitalization …
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Essay Conclusion
Glover created the song to raise awareness and also get a point across. I think he did both well, he raised awareness by showing people what is happening instead of just saying it, I feel as though people seeing things has a bigger effect than just hearing about it. He got his point across by …
Essay rough draft 2
What is America? Singer/ song writer Donald Glover, also known by his stage name Childish Gambino in his song “This is America” published on May 5th 2018 addresses the topic of racism and discrimination, and argues that discrimination and racism along with mistreatment is a large issue within the united states. He supports this claim …
Revision
Thesis: The author effectively persuades his audience by choosing to appeal real life examples, emotional tone and also being morally and ethically likeable. Topic sentence 1: The message that Glover is trying to get get across is not nessaciarly in the lyrics of the song but it is more in the music video itself, in …
Considering the audience
“This is America” by Childish Gambino Who is the intended audience? The audience was for America and everyone in America, He wanted evryone to see the issue at hand regardless of your age or sex,income or education. 2. How is the audience affected or involved ? The affect on the audience I think is based …
Essay Rough draft 1
Julian Sosa Janel Spencer Levy Writing 101 S 19 September 2019 What is America? Singer/ song writer Donald Glover, also known by his stage name Childish Gambino in his song “This is America” published on May 5th 2018 addresses the topic of racism and discrimination, and argues that discrimination and racism along with mistreatment …
Essasy Outline
I. The song “This is America” by Singer Songwriter Donald Glover also known by his stage name Childish Gambino realeased on May 5th, 2018. Glover voices his opinion on the current issue of discimanation,racism and mistreatment of african americans. He wrote the song in attempt and hope of changing people views and how the country …
Essay 1 introduction
Singer/ song writer Donald Glover, also known by his stage name Childish Gambino in his song “This is america” published on May 5th 2018 adresses the topic of racism and discrimination, and argues that discrimination and racism along with mistreatment is a large issue within the united states. He supports this claim inferring black males …
Purdue Pharma
Fox News: Conservative Support for claims: The Associated Press, The Sackler Family Credible evidence: Connecticut Attorney General William Tong as well as Arizona Attorney General Mark BrnovichCredible. Emotions: The Author is giving off negative feelings about Purdue Pharama. Word Choice: The word choice is producing neutral language. https://www.foxnews.com/health/purdue-pharma-oxycontin-opioid-crisis-settlement Author: Morgan Phiollips CNN: Liberal Support for …
Writing Strengths
I expalin things well and thoroughly. I am very organized and logical. My writing is very honest. I get peoples interest. I have strong opnions.
Julian Writing 101S 